Elevator Pitch #2
I didn't really get a lot of helpful feedback from my peers. This isn't unusual, it was just inconvenient, so I decided to think about what I didn't like about my last one and worked from there. I made a couple of my own changes including: 1) I changed my elevator pitch to focus on mothers. 2) I changed my opening to look more polished and less awkward. 3) I shortened my script to get my message across more quickly and effectively.