Elevator Pitch #3
This feedback was much more helpful this time around. I was surprised somebody said I needed to memorize it more, but it was good advice all the same. I still abhor getting in front of the camera, but I begrudgingly must admit that this has made me better at filming and presenting myself and talking at a reasonable pace so others can understand me. This time it was almost memorized and I suppose my pitch is better now; it's way more interesting now. The visual aid actually was a good bit of advice because it helped me get my point across better to show the specific parts of the dustpan.